Editor-In-A-Box, School Visit Wizard, and other fantastic products — Interview with Emma Walton Hamilton

Emma Walton Hamilton -- image used by permission
Emma Walton Hamilton — image used by permission

Welcome back for the second part of my interview with Emma Walton Hamilton about the courses and products she offers. In part one, last week, Emma and I talked about her Just Write Children’s Books online courses.

This week, we’re talking about the creative and highly useful products she offers for writers of children’s books.

As I said last week, Emma is an author (a New York Times bestselling author!), educator (besides her online courses, she also teaches writing for children in the MFA program at Stony Brook Southampton University), and freelance editor (a very talented one, I might add).

I first got to know Emma when I took her Just Write for Kids picture book writing course in 2010, and we have worked together on many projects since. I respect her knowledge, and delight in her warm, encouraging, and personable manner.

This interview was first posted on my general blog at www.bethstilborn.com, but Emma has graciously updated it for this posting. Thanks, Emma!

 

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BETH: At the end of your online courses on writing children’s books, Just Write for Kids, Just Write for Middle Grade, or Just Write for Young Adults, the student has a viable draft manuscript. But that isn’t the end, is it? The draft must be revised and edited. Here’s where your fabulous revision products, Editor-in-a-Box for Picture Books, and Editor-in-a-Box for Chapter Books and Novels come in. What led you to create Editor-in-a-Box?

EMMA: All three courses conclude with a lesson on revision, which incorporates many of the tools, resources and checklists that are in Editor-in-a-Box (with the exception of the bonus materials, such as interviews with editors, a video on revision techniques, and so forth.)

So there’s no upsell, or pressure within the courses to have to buy Editor-in-a-Box after finishing a course.

That said, I created Editor-in-a-Box because in addition to teaching children’s book writing courses and writing children’s books myself, I also work as a freelance children’s book editor – and for years I’ve been seeing clients and students making the same basic mistakes over and over again, causing me to spend my time (and their money!) focusing on avoidable issues more than the heart and meat of the story. I’m also aware that not everyone can afford to work with a freelance editor to polish a manuscript before submission.

So I wanted to come up with a tool that empowered writers to edit their own work into the best possible shape, thereby making the most of working with a freelance editor (should they choose to do so) and/or of every submission opportunity. It was also enlightened self-interest on my part, since I enjoy working with clients on meatier manuscript issues than weeding out grammar gaffes or overused words! Working with clients who’ve used my revision system prior to consulting with me is much more fun and productive for both of us. 

BETH: Could you open that box to give us just a peek at the contents? (I love the graphic for the product, by the way!)

EMMA: Editor-in-a-Box comes in two versions – one for picture books and one for novels. Both versions contain:

  • A comprehensive 6-step revision system, with specific recommendations for revising your story as well as your storytelling – in video, print and checklist form. (I set it up this way because everyone learns differently, so I wanted to offer three ways to absorb and use the information.)
  • A list of “Commonly Overused and Unnecessary Words”
  • A “Grammar Crammer” – basic grammar and punctuation rules and commonly made errors
  • Manuscript formatting and submission guidelines
  • A “Guide to Finding, Hiring and Working with Freelance Editors”
  • Interviews with several esteemed professional children’s book editors, in audio, transcript and “Top Takeaways” formats

The material is designed to be evergreen – meaning it can be used again and again with every manuscript… it’s lather, rinse, repeat.

Oh, and thank you for your appreciation of the photo of me as the Editor in the Box! My son Sam made that for me. I love it, too!

BETH: Again, there are two products, not just one. Why two?

EMMA: Because the issues are so different when it comes to revising a picture book versus revising a novel. The revision strategies for chapter books and middle grade or YA novels are more or less the same (unlike the writing strategies.) But picture books are poles apart from novels, because of their limitations in length and the necessary economy of words, and also because of the illustrations. For instance, assessing your manuscript to make sure you are not writing what the art will show is a big key to revising a picture book, but is more or less a non-issue with novels. So the revision process is quite different. Also, the interviews in the picture book version of the kit are with picture book editors, and in the novel version, they are with middle grade and YA editors.

BETH: Do you still recommend a second set of eyes on a manuscript? Or are you doing yourself out of freelance editing opportunities by providing this product? (I hope not! I’ve found your manuscript evaluations to be invaluable in making my manuscripts the best they can be.)

EMMA: Thank you for your kind words about my editing skills! Alas, these days I have less and less time to take on editing clients, given my teaching schedule and my own writing deadlines, but I do still take on an occasional project from time to time.

I will always recommend working with a freelance editor if you can afford to do so, regardless of whether or not you have used my Editor-in-a-Box revision system or any other, for several reasons. First of all, in today’s publishing environment, you get ONE chance to make a first impression. Unless a publishing house editor specifically says they’d be open to seeing a re-write, if they pass on a manuscript, that pass is final; you may not submit a revision. And in some cases, this policy extends to other editors within the same house. So it’s essential to do everything in your power to polish each manuscript into the very best possible shape you can before you submit. It should feel publication-ready (even though an acquiring editor will always find something else to tweak!)

The single best way to achieve that is to have a second set of eyes, and professional ones at that, review the manuscript. All the revision systems and tools – of Editor-in-a-Box or anything else – notwithstanding, we can never truly view our manuscripts with the same degree of perspective that a professional editor can. We’re simply too close to our own work. I mean, I’m an editor as well as an author, and I always hire a freelance editor to look over my manuscripts before I submit them, because when it comes to my own work I lack the perspective of distance that I bring to editing other people’s work.

BETH: Since we last “talked” on one of my blogs, you’ve also introduced a couple of other products. Would you like to say a few words about the School Visit Wizard, The Ultimate Guide to Picture Book Submissions, and your Picture Book Webinar Bundle?

 

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EMMA: Thanks for asking! In my experience, school author visits and manuscript submissions tend to be the most mystifying and daunting things for aspiring children’s authors – and yet they’re an essential part of the process of writing and publishing books for children and young adults.

School visits help authors build their audience, and can also boost author income exponentially…. but so many new authors are overwhelmed by the idea of reaching out to schools, getting booked and planning presentations. So I created School Visit Wizard as a one-stop, comprehensive system to help authors research, cultivate, book and deliver school visits with confidence.

The program is broken down into 7 modules containing videos, slideshows, written documents and customizable forms that writers can adapt for their own school visits. It’s a step-by-step system encompassing everything one needs to know about School Visits, including:

  • How to Research, Cultivate and Book School Visits 
  • Whether – and What – to Charge for a Visit
  • Dozens of Suggested Topics for Engaging, Age-Appropriate Presentations
  • Customizable Forms and Checklists, including: Sample Invoice, Booking Contract, Presentation Schedule and Details, Backpack Flyer, Book Order Form, Evaluation Form, etc.
  • Potential Problems & Solutions
  • Managing Book Sales
  • Do’s and Don’ts
  • Answers to 60+ FAQ’s About Doing School Visits
  • Insider Tips from Other Authors
  • Virtual School Visits
  • Recommended Resources

PLUS 3 Bonuses:

1 – Advice from the Experts – Interviews with School Visit Expert Mary Brown and Booking Agent Catherine Balkin, plus tips from fellow authors and educators with school visit experience

2 – Presenting Your Work: Developing Presentation Skills, Conquering Stage Fright and Presenting with Confidence

3 – All About Teacher’s Guides with Marcie Colleen

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The Ultimate Guide to Picture Book Submissions is a product I co-created with my friend and colleague Julie Hedlund, who is a wonderful picture book author and the founder and host of the 12 x 12 Picture Book Challenge.

We only open it up once or twice a year, because we both have such full plates with respect to our other commitments… but it is a step-by-step system to research, write, perfect and send winning picture book submissions to catch the eye of an agent or editor and snag the representation or book deal you dream of.

The System is entirely online and self-paced, with the content available in video, slides, and transcripts. Here’s what it encompasses:

MODULE 1 – GETTING STARTED

  • Unit 1 – Submitting to Agents vs. Editors
  • Unit 2 – Researching Editors and Agents – including dozens of direct links to resources
  • Unit 3 – The Query vs. The Cover Letter

MODULE 2 – QUERY LETTER COMPONENTS

  • Unit 1 – Introduction  
  • Unit 2 – Hook
  • Unit 3 –  Bio & Market Information
  • Unit 4 – Conclusion
  • Unit 5  – Putting It All Together, including fill-in-the blank query letter templates

MODULE 3 – QUERY CRITIQUE CLINIC (Video Query Critiques

  • Unit 1 – Query Critiques 1-10  
  • Unit 2 – Query Critiques 11-20 
  • Unit 3 – Query Critiques 21-30 
  • Unit 4 – Query Critiques 31-40 
  • Unit 5 – Query Critiques 41-50 
  • Unit 6 – Top 10 Query Mistakes

MODULE 4 – QUERY LETTER DOs AND DON’Ts

  • Unit 1 – Query “Dos”
  • Unit 2 – Query “Don’ts”

MODULE 5 – MANUSCRIPT SUBMISSION

  • Unit 1 – Formatting Your Submission – SEVEN examples of how to format every kind of picture book manuscript
  • Unit 2 – How to Submit illustrations (for author/illustrators)
  • Unit 3 – Submissions After Parting with an Agent
  • Unit 4 – Query Etiquette
  • Unit 5 – FAQs updated with answers to many more questions

MODULE 6 – UNDERSTANDING REJECTION LETTERS

  • Unit 1 – Interpreting Rejections
  • Unit 2 – Dealing with Feedback

MODULE 7 – I’VE GOT AN OFFER! NOW WHAT?

  • Unit 1 – Evaluating Your Offer
  • Unit 2 – Offer Etiquette
  • Unit 3 – What to Look (Out) For in a Contract

 

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The Picture Book Webinar Bundle focuses on these two all-important picture book styles/topics: Concept Books and Rhyme, Verse and Lyricism

The Concept Books Webinar discusses writing concept picture books for children. Topics covered include:

  • Understanding the purpose and value of concept books in today’s market
  • What constitutes a successful concept book
  • The difference between concept and novelty books
  • How to balance story with concept

The Rhyme, Verse and Lyricism for Children’s Book Authors Webinar addresses writing rhyming picture books and using verse and lyricism when writing in prose. Topics covered include:

  • Understanding how to scan meter
  • True rhymes versus slant rhymes
  • Free verse versus blank verse
  • Tools for incorporating lyricism in prose

Both webinars are presented in video format, with downloadable PDF’s of the slideshows.

BETH: What’s next for Emma Walton Hamilton? Any new books in the pipeline? Any other brainwaves like the ones we’ve discussed that are dancing in the back of your mind?

EMMA: My mom and I have another Very Fairy Princess book in the pipeline, due out in the Fall of this year. We’re also working together on her second memoir, and brainstorming another middle grade novel. On top of that, we’re currently developing two projects for children’s television – one is an animated series based on The Very Fairy Princess in partnership with Nelvana, one of the world’s leading international producers and distributors of children’s animated content. The other is a live-action series for young audiences, in partnership with the Henson Company, celebrating the arts.

BETH: Very exciting projects, all! Is there anything you’d like to add?

EMMA: I’d love to mention one other resource for children’s authors – the Children’s Lit Fellows Program. This is a yearlong graduate certificate program that I head up, which is sponsored by Stony Brook Southampton’s MFA in Creative Writing and Literature. Twelve Fellows per year work independently from home with mentors from our outstanding faculty and, twice a year, they come together at the Southampton campus as a cohort, once in July during the Summer Conference and again in January for a special Publishing and Editing Conference. During their year, Fellows complete one publishable YA or middle grade manuscript, or, for chapter and picture book writers, either a series concept with one completed manuscript or three separate manuscripts. Faculty mentors over the past three years have included Patricia McCormick, Maryrose Wood, Cindy Kane, Amy Krouse Rosenthal, Chris Barton, Libba Bray, Dan Yaccarino, Peter Lerangis, Samantha Berger, Tor Seidler, Megan McCafferty, Donna Freitas, Tricia Rayburn, Ann Whitford Paul, Amy Sklansky, Grace Lin and yours truly, among others. Admission is highly selective, and those interested in learning more should go to http://childrenslitfellows.com.

In addition, we host an annual summer conference for five days in July – the Southampton Children’s Literature Conference – that is open to the general public. This is a unique forum in which to study and discuss the craft of writing for children. World-renowned authors, illustrators and editors offer inspiration and guidance through workshops, lectures, group discussions and special presentations. The conference is open to new, established and aspiring writers, and is located in the Hamptons at the Eastern End of New York’s Long Island—a resort area of natural beauty.

Our Children’s Lit writing workshops are led by authors and editors of the first rank, and are the heart and soul of the conference experience. Workshops meet daily for 3 hour sessions. Enrollment is limited to 12 students per workshop. 

BETH: Very importantly, how can people find more information on your courses, services and products?

EMMA: Thank you for asking! My website will lead people to all the various resources and courses I offer. Here’s the direct link: http://emmawaltonhamilton.com/store/

Thanks again, Beth!

BETH:  Thank you, Emma! It’s always a joy to host you on my blog.

Emma Walton Hamilton -- image used by permission
Emma Walton Hamilton — image used by permission

EMMA WALTON HAMILTON is a best-selling children’s book author, editor and arts educator. With her mother, actress/author Julie Andrews, Emma has co-authored over thirty children’s books, seven of which have been on the NY Times Bestseller list, including The Very Fairy Princess series (#1 Bestseller), Julie Andrews Collection of Poems, Songs and Lullabies, the Dumpy the Dump Truck series, Simeon’s Gift, The Great American Mousical, and Thanks to You – Wisdom from Mother and Child.

Emma’s own book, RAISING BOOKWORMS: Getting Kids Reading for Pleasure and Empowerment, premiered as a #1 best-seller on Amazon.com in the literacy category and won a Parent’s Choice Gold Medal.

Emma is a faculty member of Stony Brook Southampton’s MFA in Creative Writing and Literature, where she teaches all forms of children’s book writing and serves as Director of the Children’s Literature Fellows program and the Executive Director of the Young Artists and Writers Project (YAWP), an interdisciplinary writing program for middle and high school students.  A former actress and theatre director, Emma was a co-founder of Bay Street Theatre in Sag Harbor, where she served as co-Artistic Director and Director of Education and Programming for Young Audiences for 17 years.

Emma is also an award-winning children’s book editor, and hosts the Just Write Children’s Books self-paced, home-study courses in writing picture books, chapter books and middle grade and young adult novels. In addition, she is a Grammy Award-winning audiobook narrator and an accomplished public speaker, regularly addressing arts and literary conferences, schools, universities and other groups about the value of, and synergy between, the arts and literacy.

Just Write Children’s Books online courses — an interview with Emma Walton Hamilton

Emma Walton Hamilton -- image used by permission
Emma Walton Hamilton — image used by permission

As my editing clients could attest, I often recommend my friend and colleague Emma Walton Hamilton’s excellent online courses on writing picture books, chapter books and middle grade novels, and young adult novels.

These self-paced courses provide a wealth of information in an easily understandable style. By the end of each course, you have a workable first draft ready to take to the next level.

Emma is an author (a New York Times bestselling author!), educator (besides her online courses, she also teaches writing for children in the MFA program at Stony Brook Southampton University), and freelance editor (a very talented one, I might add).

I first got to know Emma when I took her Just Write for Kids picture book writing course in 2010, and we have worked together on many projects since. I respect her knowledge, and delight in her warm, encouraging, and personable manner.

Enough intro, though — let’s get to the interview! This interview was first posted on my general blog at www.bethstilborn.com, but Emma has graciously updated it for this posting. Thanks, Emma!

 

Beth: Emma, we’ve talked about your online/home study courses in previous interviews on my By Word of Beth blog. I know you’ve done some recent updates to all your courses, so it seems a good time for us to update a previous interview for my Flubs2Fixes readers.

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My first experience of your teaching was your picture book writing course, Just Write for Kids, in 2010. What made you decide to reach out to aspiring writers online this way? How has the experience been for you?

Emma: The course was inspired by the fact that in my freelance editing practice and in my teaching at the university, I was seeing aspiring children’s book authors make the same basic mistakes over and over again.  It struck me that there were clearly some common misperceptions out there about writing for children, and with the market getting tougher and tougher, I thought (rather selfishly, I admit) that if I could give people the tools, the ground rules, for writing an effective picture book, I could perhaps save them, and myself, a lot of time and trouble.

Since I was teaching at the college, I started developing the course by recording myself in class. I had those recordings transcribed, then further developed the material to create a comprehensive course that allows people to work on the lessons at their own pace and in their own time. While it was designed to be an independent study, I wanted students to be able to ask me questions and also learn from one another, so there is a comment section attached to each lesson, as well as a private Facebook group where questions get posted and feedback is shared between me and the participants over time.

I recently revisited the course materials and did a comprehensive update. I added some new concepts, as well as some follow-up to the assignments and additional resources, bonuses, etc. I also moved it to a new platform so that it can be accomplished in a self-paced format rather than over a period of 8 weeks, and I added quizzes at the end of each unit.  I think of it as a living, breathing program that grows and adapts as I do – and as the industry does.

 

Beth: Could you give us an overview of what the course contains?

Emma: The course is comprised of 8 modules, as follows:

Module 1 – Overview – the Big Picture of Picture Books

What is a picture book? Picture Book Format, Picture Book Structure, About Illustrations

Module 2 – Ideas – Where to Get Them and How to Develop Them

Sources of Ideas, Has This Idea Been Done Before?, Ideas File, Developing an Idea, The Central Dramatic Question, Cataloguing in Publication Information, Writing a Series

Module 3 – Character

Who’s Your Hero? Developmental Characteristics of Preschoolers and Early Elementary Students, The Prime Character Questions, Character Journeys, Anthropomorphism

Module 4 – Theme

What Do You Want to Say to Kids and Why? Emotional Resonance, Writing from a Child’s Point of View, How Does This Affect Word Choice?

Module 5 – Plot

What’s Your Problem? Types of Literary Conflict, Visual Interest, Plot Structure, Plot Sequencing

Module 6 – Style

Voice, Point of View, Tense, Writing in Verse, Beginnings

Module 7 – Narrative Details

Dialogue, Show Don’t Tell, Juicy Verbs, Language, Incorporating the Senses, Pacing, Watch Out for the Passive, Indefinite, and Unnecessary, Endings, Titles

Module 8 – Editing

6-Step Revision Process

Bonuses – Editing Checklist, Writers Resources, Manuscript Submission Guidelines

 

Beth: In January of 2014, you followed up with Just Write for Middle Grade and Just Write for Young Adults. What led you to create JWFMG and JWFYA?

Emma: First of all, thank you, Beth! You’ve been such a stalwart supporter of my work, and an incredible colleague and ally in the children’s lit community. I’m so very grateful for all you do.

In the years since I launched the Just Write for Kids picture book course, I received many requests to create middle grade and YA versions, but I simply didn’t have the time to do the necessary research, etc. I was finally able to pull it together thanks to teaching middle grade and YA writing for Stony Brook Southampton’s Creative Writing MFA and in our Children’s Lit Fellows program for the past couple of years. This allowed me to do the research and compile the resources over a period of time, and eventually I gave myself a semester to pull it all together into these two home-study courses. I should mention that all three courses can be taken from anywhere in the world, at any time, and at one’s own pace, since they are designed as independent studies.

 

Beth: Could you give us a glimpse into what’s offered in the two novel-writing courses?

Emma: Both are 14-module courses, as opposed to the picture book course, which is 8 – and like the picture book course, they are accomplished in a self-paced format. Each module builds upon the previous one’s lesson(s), and includes writing assignments, exercises and checklists for works in progress,

The syllabus is similarly structured for both courses, but the content is different. By way of example, below is a partial list of what the chapter book/middle grade course includes (but isn’t limited to). The YA syllabus is structured the same way with respect to the weekly topics, but the lessons within each topic are of course tailored to YA:

MODULE 1: Intro to Middle Grade

What is Middle Grade? (Age ranges, word counts, subjects, gender, genres, etc.); MG vs. Picture Books, Chapter Books, & Young Adult (YA); Getting & Developing Ideas; Writing a Series

MODULE 2:  Character

Who’s your hero? Developmental Attributes of 8-12 Year Olds; The 4 Prime Character Questions; Character Journey; Anthropomorphism

MODULE 3: Plot

What’s the Problem? Dramatic Conflict; Classic Novel Structure; The Dramatic Arc; To Outline or Not to Outline? Scaffolding; Story Map; The Hero’s Journey

MODULE 4: Beginnings

First Chapter Musts; The Promise of the Story; Establishing Characters, World, Style, POV & Pacing; Inciting Incident; Back Story; Planting Seeds for the Ending; Info-Dumping; Cliché Openings; The First Line/Opening Sentence.

MODULE 5: Theme

What’s the Big Idea? Relatability; Universality; Revealing Theme; Multiple Themes; Must There be a Theme?

MODULE 6: Voice

Narrative Voice; Point of View; The Unreliable Narrator; Tense; Character Voice – Authenticity & Interiority; Authorial Voice; Passive & Indirect Voice

MODULE 7: Setting & World-building

Describing Your Setting (Sensory Details, Imagery, Time); World-Building (Rules of the World, Culture & Society, etc.); Chapter Books & Illustrated Novels

MODULE 8: Chapters

How Many Chapters Should I Include? Chapter Outlines; The Hero’s Journey; Chapter Ingredients; Transitions; Cliffhangers & Tension

MODULE 9: Scenes

Objectives + Obstacles = Conflict; The Elements of a Good Scene; Pacing; Zooming In & Out; Interiority; Beats; Dramatization vs. Summary; Play-by-Play Narration; Transitions & Turning Points

MODULE 10: Subplots & Secondary Characters

Roles & Archetypes; Stereotypes & Clichés; Edgy Content; Tracking Secondary Characters & Subplots

MODULE 11: Dialogue

Balancing Dialogue & Narration; The Purpose of Dialogue; Character Voice; Subtext; Attribution; Punctuating & Formatting; Info-Dumping; Dialect, Slang etc.

MODULE 12: Narrative Details

Pacing; Backstory; Tension, Suspense & Stakes; Coincidences & Surprises; Non-Linear Narrative; Verse; Edgy “Content”

MODULE 13: Endings

The Job of the Ending; Denouement; Ending Options; Clichés & Other Ending Bewares; Epilogues; Sequels, Series, etc.

MODULE 14 – Editing & Revision

Revision Guidelines; Editing Your Own Work; Submission Formatting & Guidelines; Freelance Editors; Bonuses

 

Beth: Why two courses? Why not “Just Write Novels for Kids” and leave it at that?

Emma: There are significant differences between chapter books, middle grade and young adult novels. While some of the craft elements are the same – such as basic storytelling/dramatic structure, character journey, etc. – the focus and degree of detail is quite different with each format, as is the emotional heart.

Chapter books, for instance, tend to not only be much shorter (which gives the author less opportunity for exposition, backstory, world-building, subplots, etc.), but they are also geared to the youngest side of the middle grade reader spectrum, which means the protagonist is younger and the stakes are generally lower than they would be for middle grade or YA. Small stakes – friendships challenged, mastering a new skill – feel large for this age group. This translates to smaller changes for the hero. And chapter books are often part of a series, which means kids must be able to read the books out of order, so characters tend to be more consistent and their emotional journeys from one book to the next less dramatic.

There are equally big differences between middle grade and YA. Middle grade readers are generally between 8-12, YA is 13 and up. As anyone who has ever been a teenager will remember, there’s a vast difference between 10-year-olds and 13-year-olds, let alone 16-year-olds, so the ages of the main characters differ tremendously, and as a result, so do the attendant themes, character journeys and other issues.

Adults can still play major roles in middle grade, for instance, where they tend to take a real back seat in YA. Middle grade novels tend to be more internally focused; they’re more about self-growth and the hero discovering who he/she is in the world, whereas in YA the hero notices the world around them and often moves from a more selfish stage in life to awareness of the feelings and situations of others. YA characters are old enough to be fairly independent and can get into trouble on their own, so there is more grittiness and realism. And of course there are vast differences in terms of what we call “content” – which is edgy language or mature issues. Whereas middle grade is still very tame in this regard, YA can and does include sexuality, profanity, violence, substance abuse, or basically any edgy content relevant to teens today.

Given the range of these differences, I felt it important to create two courses so that I could address the issues relevant to each format in greater detail.

 

Beth: Since I’ve taken both JWFK and JWFMG, I know that there’s a Facebook Group as well. Could you say a bit about it and its purpose?

Emma: Absolutely! I created the Facebook Group as a way for the participants in the course to ask me questions and to also learn from one another. All my courses are designed as independent studies, which means participants work at their own pace and do not submit their writing assignments to me for critique (though I do provide suggested answers or examples in each module relative to the lessons of the previous one, that students can compare to their own assignments.)

That said, I am always available for questions that come up. All the courses have the ability for participants to post questions within each lesson, which is valuable not only for the person asking the question but also for future participants, since the questions and my answers remain there in perpetuity. But the Facebook Group takes it a step further. It’s a more visible, immediate and social way to ask questions and share comments, and it allows others who have taken the course to respond along with me. This broadens the discussion exponentially, and has the added bonus of giving me feedback and ideas for areas in which I can improve the courses whenever I do updates or revisions.

 

Beth: Very importantly, how can people find more information on your courses?

Emma: Thank you for asking! My website will lead people to all the various resources and courses I offer. Here’s the direct link: http://emmawaltonhamilton.com/store/

and here are the links to the specific courses in case you missed them in the body of the interview:

Just Write for Kids: http://emmawaltonhamilton.com/store/just-write-for-kids-picture-books/

Just Write for Middle Grade: http://emmawaltonhamilton.com/store/just-write-for-middle-grade/

Just Write for Young Adults: http://emmawaltonhamilton.com/store/just-write-for-young-adults/

 

Beth: Thanks so much for this overview of your courses, Emma! 

NEXT WEEK the interview will continue with a look at the other products and services Emma offers.

Be sure to come back on Friday, March 4th!

 

Emma Walton Hamilton -- image used by permission
Emma Walton Hamilton — image used by permission

EMMA WALTON HAMILTON is a best-selling children’s book author, editor and arts educator. With her mother, actress/author Julie Andrews, Emma has co-authored over thirty children’s books, seven of which have been on the NY Times Bestseller list, including The Very Fairy Princess series (#1 Bestseller), Julie Andrews Collection of Poems, Songs and Lullabies, the Dumpy the Dump Truck series, Simeon’s Gift, The Great American Mousical, and Thanks to You – Wisdom from Mother and Child.

Emma’s own book, RAISING BOOKWORMS: Getting Kids Reading for Pleasure and Empowerment, premiered as a #1 best-seller on Amazon.com in the literacy category and won a Parent’s Choice Gold Medal.

Emma is a faculty member of Stony Brook Southampton’s MFA in Creative Writing and Literature, where she teaches all forms of children’s book writing and serves as Director of the Children’s Literature Fellows program and the Executive Director of the Young Artists and Writers Project (YAWP), an interdisciplinary writing program for middle and high school students.  A former actress and theatre director, Emma was a co-founder of Bay Street Theatre in Sag Harbor, where she served as co-Artistic Director and Director of Education and Programming for Young Audiences for 17 years.

Emma is also an award-winning children’s book editor, and hosts the Just Write Children’s Books self-paced, home-study courses in writing picture books, chapter books and middle grade and young adult novels. In addition, she is a Grammy Award-winning audiobook narrator and an accomplished public speaker, regularly addressing arts and literary conferences, schools, universities and other groups about the value of, and synergy between, the arts and literacy.

Interview with Becky Levine!

Becky LevineA few weeks ago, I recommended the excellent book, The Writing & Critique Group Survival Guide by Becky Levine. Today I’m delighted to welcome Becky to Flubs2Fixes in this first interview on the blog. I’ve known Becky for a few years (although we have yet to meet in person) and she is a delightful and insightful person.

Becky Levine is a writer living in California’s Santa Cruz mountains. She is the author of The Writing & Critique Group Survival Guide and has written two nonfiction children’s books for Capstone Press. She is a former book reviewer for The Horn Book Guide. Becky currently writes middle-grade fiction and picture books, with the support of her brilliant and creative critique group. You can find her blog at this link.

Welcome to Flubs2Fixes, Becky! And now, on to the interview —

Beth: As you know, a few weeks ago I featured your excellent book, The Writing and Critique Group Survival Guide. Thank you for writing it! Could you tell us a bit about your writing and critiquing background?

Becky: I’ve been writing since I was a kid, but I didn’t start critiquing until I was in college. I took creative writing workshops at UC Irvine with Oakley Hall, and he really started me off on my critique path. His approach was that a critique’s purpose is to help the author write the story they wanted, not the story the critiquer might want to see. And, you know, we were all pretty beginning writers at that point, but he never made any of us feel that our stories didn’t have potential. They did, and the critiquer’s job was to help the author bring out that potential. This is still how I try to critique today, and where I believe the value of critiquing lies.

Beth: It sounds as though you have a lot of experience with critique groups. What made you decide to share your experience in this book?

Becky: I guess I just talked to so many writers who seemed afraid to join a critique group. Or to writers who had been in a critique group and had horror stories to tell. And I have gotten so much help and support from my groups that, well…it’s my soapbox. 🙂

Beth: In your view, why is it important for writers to get feedback on their writing from critique groups or freelance editors?

Becky: The first reason is that we are so immersed in our own writing, we often can’t see it clearly. We actually know the story, maybe not as well as we should, but in more detail than we might manage to get on the page. It takes a fresh set of eyes to catch what we haven’t got there.

Beyond that, the power of a group brainstorming session, with truly creative people who trust each other, is immeasurable. I can’t count how many times I’ve felt stuck and, after meeting with my critique partners, come away with a heap of ideas that get the words flowing again.

A good freelance editor can also provide a lot of help, but I do think working with an editor is different than working with a critique group. Since the editor is only one person, you don’t necessarily get the magical exchange of ideas that you do with a strong group. Also, depending on the cost, many writers just can’t afford to go back and forth with the editor as many times as thorough and deep revision may demands.

I sometimes suggest that an editor can be a step after your book has been through a critique group several times. By that time, your critique partners can be almost as immersed in your story as you are, and the editor can definitely catch holes and inconsistencies the group isn’t seeing anymore.

Also, being a good critiquer doesn’t necessarily mean you’re a strong copyeditor; it’s always helpful to have someone with an eye for sentence flow and grammar take a pass at your close-to-finished manuscript. Finally, if your editor is immersed in the publishing business, they may very well bring a stronger sense of the current market to their editing, and that can be an invaluable help.

Beth: What are three elements of critiquing that you think are of key importance for beginning writers?

Becky: The most important element is respect—you need to respect the time the writer has put into their work, the vision they have for their story, and their courage and strength in sharing their manuscript with you. This means that, for every critique, you put in the time and thought their writing deserves—the same time and thought you’re hoping for from them, when your roles are reversed.

Also, think about how you’re saying things. Yes, you’re digging deep, you’re letting the writer know what isn’t working, you’re asking them to make changes. Okay, but you can do all that nicely, or you can do it harshly. And Mary Poppins was right about that spoonful of sugar.

Beyond that, don’t be too hard on yourself. A lot of writers worry that, when they start critiquing, they won’t be able to come up with anything to say. They’re afraid their suggestions won’t make sense or won’t be substantial enough to really help. But critiquing is a skill that can be learned and strengthened, just like any other.

Take a chance, put your ideas out there—even if they’re just questions or possible changes. And, over time, as you and your critique partners share and discuss, you will contribute more and more to help the other writers in the group.

Finally, think. Remember those teachers who would circle a word or phrase in your essay and write “Awkward” in the margin? Awkward, how? Awkward, why? When you’re critiquing, you’ll read something (or many somethings) that doesn’t work for you. You’ll hear the discord in your brain, or you’ll feel it in your gut.

Don’t stop there. Take a few minutes more to reread the passage and ask yourself why it doesn’t feel right, why it’s jarring. See how far you can get to understanding the problem, and then see if you can come up with one or more possible solutions. Offer that understanding, those ideas, to the writer in your critique. It will take them so much further in their revision than a simple “Awkward.”

Beth: On December 4th, I posted about how to deal with critiques when a writer receives them (in particular, I addressed receiving a critique from a freelance editor, since that’s my perspective.) What would you say to a writer about how to deal with feedback from critique group members?

Becky: Listen. Listen, listen, listen. And then go away from the critiques for a while, come back, and listen (okay, re-read!) again. It is so hard, at times, to really hear what a person is saying about your story, especially when so much of their critique is telling you about things you need to change.

There is a golden rule that the person being critiqued can’t defend their work, can’t even—in some groups—open their mouth while they’re being critiqued. While I think that’s a bit harsh, it is really important to try not to argue or explain. The person critiquing your work has tried really hard to describe what isn’t working for them, and you know what? That’s also really hard to do.

So be patient and hear all their thoughts. If you really don’t understand something, ask questions and have a conversation. See what the other people in the group think. And then, even if you’re not satisfied or happy, take time away from the critique and let it stew. Give it another chance later, in your own private writing space, to make sense. Sometimes, it won’t. Sometimes, obviously, a critiquer’s suggestions are going to be wrong for what you’re trying to do. But sometimes, often, they’re going to be right.

At the very least, always go back and re-read the passage that caught the critiquer’s (negative) attention. You’d be surprised how often, as I grumble and mutter about a critique, I’ll reread the problem section and suddenly see something I could improve. Even if it’s nothing like what the critiquer wanted me to do.

Beth: Is there anything you’d like to add?

Becky: Joining a critique group or hiring an editor can often feel like a risk. We write and revise a manuscript, and we feel like it’s reached a certain stage of “good.” And then we think about asking someone else to look at, and all the doubt creeps in. Or, you know, blasts in!

But the dream for all of us, I think, is that there is an audience at the end of the book, whether that’s a child laughing with our picture book or someone older totally immersed in our novel. And dreams aren’t achieved without risks.

Besides, a good critique group doesn’t just support you in your writing. They will be there with you for every step of the journey, consoling you and cheering you on. And they’ll bring chocolate.

Thanks so much, Becky, for being with us today! I so appreciate your insights about critique groups!